Oooh wow. That is heartbreaking and adorable all at the same time the moment I see it. You've really captured that moment when they both find, at least for a little while, a taste of what they each want. Murky wants his mother, Coral wants her son. That scene is one of my personal little favourites as of recent (Am I allowed to have self favourites? Well, I'll say one I was pleased with then. ) for that little maternal moment.
Love how you've interpreted Coral Eve, especially the cutie mark! I'd just seen a bog standard wave but adding in the MLP style twirly art to the froth of the wave is just great! I think I'll be seeing that as my canon from now on. Throw in her face really carrying that expression down to Murky and the great choice of a light blue rag (again, something I think I'll be seeing in my head from now on) and wow, you really did her justice for her first artwork!
I have to echo what Ana said too, the bar shadows, them being off centre in the image, that all adds up to a great atmosphere. So pleased with this, thanks so much!
I'd also like to state to those watching that this was a generous move on Burnout's part, I didn't go to him for the request! He came and offered to do something and asked what I'd like. How awesomely kind is that?! What a guy.